Blog article English corrections

Since I’m not an English native speaker, I often make mistakes in writing English.
This topic is for reporting incorrect English phrases in my blog articles.
Feel free to report!
Any suggestion would be appreciated :slight_smile:

To Rael: Please post here!

Hi Takuya,

I wanted to point out a small mistake in the Preferences dialog, under Backup:

Should be:
Backup stores all your data to the local filesystem.

Also similar issue here:

“You can back up your all data to your local filesystem”
Should be:
You can backup all your data...

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Hi Rael,

Thanks for the report! Will fix it :smiley:

Hey Takuya,

Hope you don’t have similar experiences in the future, Here are some corrections/suggestions for your recent article:

But the thing happened.
suggestion: But then it happened.

I noticed an alert email from AWS CloudWatch which tells the high CPU utilization

which reported
which told of

was too busy than usual.

was alot busier than usual.
was much busier than usual

so that the attacker can’t create more fake accounts

couldn’t create more

most people who received the scum email

scam email

as many as they want

as many times as

Thanks Rael,

It’s fine for now. That was so tough!

“The thing happened” was a very Japanese-like expression, haha.

Looks like I have to learn more about the sequence of tenses.
Thanks again for the corrections!